miércoles, 1 de diciembre de 2010

Projects 4-My favourite place

My favourite place is matalascañas (Huelva).In go to matalascañas all year with my parents.In matalascañas go to the beach, see my friends and relaxed.In the hotel many people and a lot of friends,my best friends in the hotel are::fran,laura,sergio,coral and alex.
Sometimes go to my cousin house,it's very funny



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  1. My ...matalascañas (Matalascalas, be careful with capital letters) (Huelva).In (I) go to matalascañas (CAPITAL LETTER!!) all (ALONG THE) year with my parents.In matalascañas (CAPITAL LETTERS!!!!) ..... and relaxed (I'M RELAXED / I RELAX).In the hotel (THERE ARE) many people and ...Sometimes (I) go to my cousin house,it's very funny

    Too many mistakes. Be careful next time!! :(

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